Radhika MundraWhen My Heart Cries
My heart often cries
A cry too shy
When the morning sun shines
And the evening sun dies
In a moment of defeat
My heart often cries
My heart often cries
A cry too shy
When the unasked tears fall
The reason oh so small
Finding a song to belong
My heart often cries
My heart often cries
A cry too shy
When it’s afraid to be bold
Offered a hand to hold
Yet too afraid to belong
My heart often cries
xxx
I am taking part in The Write Tribe Problogger October 2017 Blogging Challenge
Offered a hand to hold
Yet too afraid to belong
Loved these lines.
I loved this! The repetition of the three lines is so powerful and you’ve managed to evoke emotions in the reader through this piece.
Such a lovely poem. Can relate to this so much 🙂
Nice try, Keep writing !
My heart often cries
A cry too shy
Loved tehse line !!
Beautiful lines! The pure heart sheds tears to reflect its true feelings…
Lovely poem.. so many emotions in few lines
a poignant one.
Radica this is beautiful. Even I used to write poems but most of them are for school books from grade 1 to 8. Will get back to you in case you would like to share a few with us
A lovely, heartfelt poem.
The 2nd poem i read today and again bang on..I bet it’s not just me who relates to ‘My heart often cries
A cry too shy’ . A poet’s work is to touch the right chords and you just did that! Keep writing more.
This was poignant. A crying heart never looked so beautiful. 🙂
Heart breaking poem. But you made it excellent. Happy to join with you for #writetribeprobloggerchallenge !!!
What a beautiful poem! Poingnant lines.
Amazingly penned Radhika ..
Beautiful poem ……I love the way you express your feelings though your writing it’s a gift …..the music and the words match up lovely….great job
Poignant piece of poetry with a lovely rhythm.
Short yet so sweetly heartbreaking.
Afraid to be bold even when offered a hand to hold – Those are such powerful lines. First thing that came to my mind was – once bitten twice shy. Loved it
Not sure if I’m replying to the correct blog here ( you had asked me to leave a msg , can’t find the correct one…… But I didn’t want to come across as rude ). ;/ So;
Never bottle up thoughts or feelings as it’ll only make you sink into depression. 🙁
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BTW, Love the poem . Simply Luv the phrase;
I offered a hand……………………
Beautiful,. Really is thought evoking.
TC.
Hey, I love it., really do. Oh yes, it’s been a long time. Great!
“Finding a song to belong …yet too afraid to belong.” Perhaps that’s why you are different. To provide the beauty in diversity. That’s your song, the ache in your heart! What else can I say? Beautiful poem!
Wow i can hear my breath very good lines and music exactly moving together :):):)