The Ancient Song
the final wave is coming along,
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Radhika Mundra is an aspiring writer, a lifestyle blogger and an intense storyteller.
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Dear XX Purple, There I stood, right behind the big guy, listening to all that you said about all the things that mattered to you. I was hoping my name would come up every time you uttered an ‘and’, but it...
She was very happy that day. Her son was finally returning from that foreign land after four long years. She had done everything that she could have that could please her son. Prepared the sweets he loved with her hands...
I can see him sleeping peacefully on our bed. He didn’t even stir when I entered the room as if I never entered. I wonder if he ever slept that soundly beside me. He has nothing on besides his briefs. I reach by...
Radhika Mundra is an aspiring writer, a lifestyle blogger and an intense storyteller.
Radhika Mundra is an aspiring writer, a lifestyle blogger and an intense storyteller.
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Very gripping story. Thank's for sharing. :))
Wonderful ending it makes me happy to see the love he has for her and the rest of the people in her life.
Keep writing you are very good at it you kept so very interested for the ending.
Have a great weekend
Thanks so much for the appreciation Sara, I am really glad you liked the ending. 🙂 Have a great weekend yourself! 😀
Thanks so much, Christine! 🙂 xx
Nice suspense! You are not too far from your destination of publishing a book <3
Love it. Sci fi mystery love story family drama. Excellently crafted, satisfying. ending.
An ending I didn't see coming, and a realistic one. She didn't fall into his arms – that would have been unrealistic I don't know if she, even now, has fully accepted this lesson. Only time will tell, I suppose.
Great! Loved it
Totally fascinating! <3
it got me going ..
very well written.
Oh that was good one. Fantastically plotted. I thought may be he will propose or something but good to leave her with that food for thought.
Thanks so much Anita! You made my day! 🙂
Thank you so much, Elizabeth! ☺️
Thanks so much, Rishav! 🙂
Thank you so much, Parul! Hope you enjoyed reading the story. 😀
I didn't expect that. Wonderful plot and your narrating style was fascinating, as always… 🙂 Loved the way it ended…
What a terrific happy ending with a twist. Heart pounding and fast paced narration where thriller marries romance. At some point, I thought Michael wore streak of grey. Superb:)
Hey Radhika. I read part IV of the Ancient Song, then I read Part I, Part II, and Part III. Even though pressed for time, I had to finish the story. I really enjoy your writing style. Without doubt, you are one of my favorite writers. Keep going!
Hey Radhika. I read part IV of the Ancient Song, then I read Part I, Part II, and Part III. Even though pressed for time, I had to finish the story. I really enjoy your writing style. Without doubt, you are one of my favorite writers. Keep going!
Now, if you had predicted it, wouldn't be much of a mystery, will it? Glad to know you liked it. 😀
Wouldn't no shades of grey make him a lousy villain? 😛 Thanks, glad that you enjoyed reading it. 🙂
Thanks so much for the appreciation, Hugh. You made my day! Eh, good to know even though you started from the end, you finished the story. 😀
Nice mix of thrill and romance.
Unbelievable turnaround. I loved it. From a nail-biting thriller to a lovely romance. Beautiful Radhika.
Thanks so much, Reeti! 😀
Thanks so much, Gowthama! 😀
Very nice compilation. I got blown off and am totally mesmerized. 🙂 I would love to see you as an author. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much, Aashish! With readers like you, I wouldn't mind writing a book or two! 🙂
Great story and point made. Bravo!
It’s an awesome story.. Can grab anyone’s attention…. Thanks for writing:)
Thanks so much, Neel! 🙂